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Milla: "Apologize. Now."
Alvin: "Okay okay, I'm sorry. For real. Stop crying already, ok?"
Elise: "...*sob*"
Tipo: "Alvin is stupid idiot!"
Rowen: "Alvin-san, you're causing me grey hair faster than age this far."
Alvin: "Sheesh, Rowen your hair is already all gray!"
Leia: "I'll kick your butt for this Alvin, you can count on it."
Alvin: "C'mon not you too, I'm already about to lose my head here."
Jude: "Ah Milla, no need to be so harsh. Let's put our weapons away, ok?"
Milla: "Jude be quiet for a moment, he deserves this."
Jude: "Please... I don't know how to attach a head once it's off."


Ah finally finished~ I have no idea what Alvin has done to make Elise cry but the others aren't amused so he must have gone a bit overboard this time. Shame on you AlvinxD

This is a picture I started in last July... I started sketching it then and thought about drawing only Alvin and Elise, but then after sketching the roughs of them I added Jude and Milla too. After that I thought I would just have to add Leia and Rowen too|D The rough sketches were done in July, but my rough sketches are VERY rough (like, stick-figures and stuffxD). I then got a lot of other things to do and got around sketching the cleaner sketches later, I sketched Milla around the beginning of September, same for Leia. Rowen somewhere in October and then the rest much later in November. Also made the lineart in November-December and then coloured it bit by bit till now.

So it took me almost half a year to finish thisxD That's why Millas pose looks much more stiff than Alvin's. She was the first I sketched out and Alvin was the last.

I would be very happy to get some feedback for this picture. It's the last one I'll submit this year (I think) and I would like to improve my art next year a lot so people pointing out mistakes from my most recent piece (which is not a gift or commission to anyone) would be very helpful:) Though I wouldn't want to hear any critique on the character designs since they are not mine, but from the game Tales of Xillia.

And for those who are afraid of leaving critique to an artist, don't worry, I'm looking for honest feedback and definitely won't get angry or start disliking anyone for giving me advice (It even sounds silly to me to get angry if someone is offering help). So please help me if you have some tips or think something could use some work. I'll open the critique feature on this too so feel free to use it (even though I hate the stars system|D).

Of course I would also like to fangirl with other Tales fans who are getting excited of Xillia too:la:


To :iconimprovement-club:: I would like to receive some help and maybe even redlines to one/some/all of the poses. Anything you see off in the anatomy ( especially hands;_; ) and if you have time then some tips for colouring too:) Any help would be really appreciated.



Also, this was actually meant to be a remake of this but in the end it looks nothing like it. But I like the comparison anyways(:

Jude/Rowen/Leia/Elise&Tipo/Alvin/Milla/Tales of Xillia (c) Namco Bandai
art (c) =ScytheDancer
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~Isshak-Gravi Apr 8, 2013  New member
Hey! I was wondering: can we use this in our Tales of Xillia newsletter please? We really like it :)
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=ScytheDancer Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tales of Xillia newsletter? I haven't heard of it before, is it online newsletter or something? And sure, as long as my signature (the dA url) isn't removed you can use it in the newsletter:) Thank you for asking^^
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~Isshak-Gravi Apr 8, 2013  New member
Yes it's a newsletter sent to all our European, Asian and Australian territories :) And of course there's a link to your work!
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=ScytheDancer Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow nice^^ Thank you:)
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Mood: Love ~ForeverTALES552 Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Ei vitsi, tää on aivan mahtava, nauroin hauskalle dialogille kauan! Alvin on nytte pahas pulas, opettelis jo tyyppi välttämään niitä XD
Toisaalta minkäs sille voi ku tyyppi tykkää Tipon härnäämisestä.
Anyway värit ja varjostukset on hyvin tehty ja asennotkin on itseasiassa yllättävänki hyvän näköisiä, etenki tuo Millan miekkakäsi. En ole sen kummempi perspektiivi/väri asiantuntia, mut tää näyttää kokonaisuudes erinomaiselta
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=ScytheDancer Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kiitos paljon>w> Hyvä että viihdyttixD Oli hauskaa käydä keskustelua päässä hahmojen välillä samalla ku työsti tätä kuvaa: D Ja Alvin saa todennäköisesti "BAHO":n kaiverrettuna nahkaansa, jos ei saa Eliseä taas hymyilemääx) Ja tosi hyvä, että Millan miekkakäsi ei näytä hirveeltä, tappelin sen kanssa hyvän aikaa ennen ku olin tyytyväine:'D
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~ForeverTALES552 Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Tottakai, hyvää kuvaa pitää aina kehua ;D
Mitä baho muuten meinaa? (en oo kuulukkaan koko sanasta orz)
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=ScytheDancer Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha "baho" on Tipon keksimä haukkumasana AlvinillexD Baka (tyhmä) + Aho (idiootti) = Baho lyhyesti. Tipo käyttää sitä Alvinista aika usein pelin aikana. Mielenkiintosta nähä miten se käännetää enkkuversiosxD Fanikäännöksessä oli "jerkron" tai jotai.
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~ForeverTALES552 Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Just, jotenki niin Tipon tapaista yhdistellä sanoja :icontipoplz:
Haha olishan se kiva tietää mitä ne kääntäjät keksii;
"jerkot", "Iderk" etc. ? XD
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Sweet drawing!
I hope to see you in this [link]
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